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Post by megster1992 on Jan 10, 2011 13:33:16 GMT
Okay, so previously I discussed a fanfiction where Bella is a Child of the Moon. Only problem is, I don't know what all is going to happen. I know the beginning and some steps along the way, but I don't know how it'll end.
Any suggestions?
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Post by JocelynTorrent on Jan 10, 2011 21:24:01 GMT
I guess I missed your first discussion of this. I'm sorry. Are you wanting suggestions on climax, characters, ending? All of it?
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 10, 2011 21:25:03 GMT
Climax and ending. I pretty much got characters down and their relationships. (Edcob and Angeleah will also be featured in this fic).
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Post by JocelynTorrent on Jan 10, 2011 21:29:55 GMT
Oh. Fraid I can't help, ma'am, as I don't know what you're talking about. I did make an effort though  Sorry. |
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 10, 2011 21:33:17 GMT
It's the story where Bella is a Child of the Moon. I discussed it somewhere else...I can't remember where. But yeah, she's more rude and has a backbone. She'll also give someone who's last name ends in Black a black eye.
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Post by JocelynTorrent on Jan 10, 2011 21:42:26 GMT
Well, with the moon factor, you could always have Bella lose it. Maybe in a public place or something. That could be your climax. And if Alice or someone intervenes, maybe Bella hurts them, resulting in more conflict etc.
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 10, 2011 21:44:59 GMT
Hmm. That could work. I even planned for Bella to hurt some of the Cullens anyway, and they in return try and kidnap her to find out what she is.
Thanks for the helps.
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Post by JocelynTorrent on Jan 10, 2011 21:46:04 GMT
No problem, ma'am. Good luck
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 10, 2011 21:47:37 GMT
...that Texan accent of yours is slipping through the text, me thinks.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 10, 2011 23:44:24 GMT
Is Bella's pack going to return?
Will there be conflict with the La Push shifters?
Will the Volturi come around?
Will any rogue vampires take an interest in Bella?
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 11, 2011 2:20:28 GMT
3 is a definite yes. When they kidnap her...Aro is around. Don't know why, be he will be.
As for 1, 2 and 4. How would I make that work? I can see James being all creepy and wanting to play with her...but still, I don't want him to randomly appear like in Twilight, you know what I mean?
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 11, 2011 2:24:46 GMT
"She" (you should know who) gets concerned about Bella when she stops calling (they could call and talk, maybe?) and decides to go looking for her and the others follow, thus bringing them to Forks where they meet the La Push wolves. Bella didn't make the best impression so some of the wolves get into a fight with them and Bella comes to help out.
As for 4, it doesn't necessarily have to be James or Victoria, it could be someone else that happens upon the area. It was just an idea, though.
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Post by megster1992 on Jan 11, 2011 2:26:25 GMT
I know who you're talking about. Hmm, that sounds good. Might use that. Wolf-on-wolf action.
I'll think on four.
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Post by Enjorous on Jan 11, 2011 4:06:12 GMT
I saw that as "I think on all fours."
My mind needs to get out of the gutter occasionally.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 12, 2011 19:00:36 GMT
Seriously? You caught 'I think on all fours' but you didn't catch wolf-onwolf action? Really?
Anyway, you have something like Bella hurts Cullens, they kidnap her, she breaks out, beats up the Cullens some more? Is that right?
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Sorry.
