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Post by Bella+Alice on Nov 24, 2010 23:43:12 GMT
Place Your Reviews Here.
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Post by lysystrata on Jan 29, 2011 22:12:08 GMT
I want to review but can't find the darned story.
Found it online at FF. Well first I don't really like FUTA, second it's a one shot lemon.
With that said you create good imagery and are quite evocative.
I say the same thing I said to my friend sweet, you could use a beta to distill the talent you obviously have.
Keep writing.
~Sara~
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