Review:Broken Hearted parts1 and 2

[bellice4ever]

Wonderful fic!I loved it,specially how you change the perspective on the second part but it's still the same text basic,of course i liked the second part more,but i also love the first part even if i really hate sad/unhappy endings this one was well fit and very well written.Really well done,thanks for it

[Enjorous]

I thought it was well done as well. I don't normally go for stories set in the present tense (except for the odd choose your own adventure...what can I say I'm secretly five years old). But you worked it rather well in this story.