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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 1:27:42 GMT
Ok well I think I will start it off by listing one of the best Alice/Bella stories I have ever read.
It's called "Age Doesn't Matter in Love" by XxKelleyxX. I have to say I am obsessed with this story. The relationship and character development is great. Anyone else read it?
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Post by azb on Feb 7, 2011 1:33:18 GMT
I have actually reread it, haha. Which is a big thing. I like the writing style, personally. Though a part of me is all "Guys. Wait 'til it's not insanely illegal, please."
Also, her choice in titles is really not the best. Because first time I saw it I did think about was about pedophilia.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 1:45:21 GMT
I have reread it too, waiting for the update. Do you think you should wait even though you are in love? Despite the situation? I don't think I could.
Hmm another story. Forever by JocelynTorrent. I really have to throw that out there because it is an improved Twilight. Rose Read By JocelynTorrent. Both paint Rosalie in a completely different light, fully capturing the potential that character had.
And though azb would not approve "Rain, Regret, and the Absence of Willpower" by AstronautZombieBerndi. You feel immense loss when it ends because you wanted to continue it forever. Yeah the writing is that good.
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Post by megster1992 on Feb 7, 2011 1:45:31 GMT
That's actually the fic that got me into Bellice, actually. When she updated it back in December I nearly flipped out of my chair.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 1:46:38 GMT
OMG Yes, chapter 27! OMG Chapter 27!
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Post by megster1992 on Feb 7, 2011 1:51:54 GMT
I posted it on twitter too. I was like "OMFG Age Doesn't Matter In Love updated!"
But yes, that was the general consensus.
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Post by azb on Feb 7, 2011 1:53:59 GMT
Lol, twitter. That just makes me laugh. And, okay, so I had to go and remind myself what happened in chapter 27, so maybe I'm not as into it as you guys  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 1:57:46 GMT
Any story suggestions, guys?
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Post by megster1992 on Feb 7, 2011 1:59:34 GMT
Hmmm.
"The Cullen Ranch" by CeceAsh. Bella's kind of a delinquet and is sent to go to the Cullens' ranch to work for I forget how many weeks. It's written by my new Beta (who is enthusiastic about my new story) and it's good. It's still fresh, just a couple chapters, but the story pulls you in.
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Post by azb on Feb 7, 2011 2:03:28 GMT
I really enjoyed Election by Dee12. B/R, so no Bellice loving, but still pretty cool. The writing has the best references in it, ever. And Bella is totally kind of a loser, which is so refreshing |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 2:29:15 GMT
Yes! I have read that one. It is good. I though the development was a little bit rushed and unexpected, but it was fun to read.
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Post by azb on Feb 7, 2011 2:33:37 GMT
Well, yeah. But the dialogue totally made up for it. I'll find something to recommend for best character development, actually. Obviously they're totally separate, in my mind. One day I'll come across something that does both, and it'll be awesome.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2011 2:37:15 GMT
Wow high standards cyborg.
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Post by megster1992 on Feb 7, 2011 2:38:31 GMT
Who has disclosed her gender.
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Post by azb on Feb 7, 2011 2:39:58 GMT
Hey, it's hard! My dialogue is as shallow as anything, and I can only do dialogue-less development. So yeah, I think it's hard to do both |
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