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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 24, 2010 2:38:09 GMT
*cough* Jacob in Blood Solstice. *cough*
How far are you into that, anyways?
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 2:43:50 GMT
Honestly I just finished chapter 8. Christmas making, family, friends, shopping aren't making for free time.
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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 24, 2010 2:45:57 GMT
I'm not upset, just curious.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 2:49:52 GMT
If you'd like I'll PM some of my more constructive comments. Just some general patterns I've noticed that could easily have fixed themselves in later chapters.
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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 24, 2010 2:54:58 GMT
I suppose. Mostly grammar problems, I assume.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 2:57:23 GMT
Yeah, grammar, specifically in dialogue.
P.S. Spell checker dialogue is a correct spelling of the word, stop flagging it as wrong!
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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 24, 2010 3:00:21 GMT
Yeah. I know, I made a lot of mistakes there.
I can't figure that out. It's dialogue, not dialog. What the heck.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 3:07:25 GMT
The first is the British spelling the latter is American.
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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 24, 2010 3:13:35 GMT
Oh. Well I didn't know.
So, pm me then. Let me see my mistakes. I hope I don't have too many.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 3:15:16 GMT
I had to google personally.
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Post by Twigon on Dec 24, 2010 3:22:35 GMT
And then you get to call them out on their self-righteous shit! Good times, good times...
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Post by Twigon on Dec 24, 2010 3:23:34 GMT
Wow. Sorry, I was reading the wrong page, so my new reply looks like some random statement.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 3:24:04 GMT
Call who?
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Post by Twigon on Dec 24, 2010 3:25:03 GMT
Stick my first reply on the end of page ffive.
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Post by Enjorous on Dec 24, 2010 3:27:08 GMT
Oh okay, now it makes sense.
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