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Post by Enjorous on Jan 2, 2011 6:08:27 GMT
No you're not, but I already started it, plus I gave you my word, and therefore I'm honorbound to finish it.
I forgot the difference between the two stories.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 2, 2011 6:26:56 GMT
Crimson Sun is the A/B/Am story. The Crescent one is the B/A one where Bella is a Dhampir and Alice is a wolf.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 2, 2011 23:54:36 GMT
Wow. I leave for one day, and you two fill up two more pages.
If you want, you could always put in a bit of angst and jealusey (not how you spell it, but I forgot how to) by making a friendship form between Leah and Alice since they both are female wolves. Or you could put in a lot of rivalry by making Leah also interested in Bella. There are almost limitless possiblities.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 0:06:55 GMT
Did you read the last two pages, Twigon? I'm sure you could post an opinion on what we talked about.
Alice will not get along with the Quileute pack, not at all. She already had problems with her past pack. You never know, though.
And I've changed it to Edward/Paul. I'm pretty sure it was you (Twigon) who said that was better than having so many OCs. Still keeping the other two, though. Though Chloe's mate was changed to someone else.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 3, 2011 3:05:49 GMT
Yes, it was me. I think that Bella shouldn't get along with the Cullens, either. Maybe make it a little bit backward, and have the wolf be okay with the vampires, while the dhampir gets along with the wolves?
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 3:12:27 GMT
Nah, they aren't going to get along with anybody at first, not even each other. But I do want Bella to eventually get used to the Cullens, maybe the wolves. She feeds from humans, so it'd make it hard for them to like her.
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Post by Enjorous on Jan 3, 2011 3:17:12 GMT
There's a new twist in an old branch. Not used to dhampirs needing blood.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 3:34:37 GMT
Didn't Reneswhatever need blood? From BD?
Yeah, they need blood in my stories.
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Post by Enjorous on Jan 3, 2011 3:49:36 GMT
Yeah, never finished the 4th one. Way too random.
Normally they have all the strengths and none of the weaknesses. Apparently blood dependency is a weakness.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 4:04:39 GMT
Mine have both the strengths and the weaknesses. Stronger, faster, more durable and better senses than a normal human, but not that of a normal vampire. They need blood, but they can eat human food and drink water (they need both, actually). Sleep is necessary, though they can go for longer periods of time without it (not without cost). They heal quicker, their skin is slightly stronger (takes more to bruise/scar, but it can still be cut, etc.). Can hold breath longer and run faster without tiring out, but too much sun exposure (the hotter, the worse) can slowly begin causing pain.
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Post by Enjorous on Jan 3, 2011 4:07:17 GMT
Do yours excel at killing vampires?
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 4:20:38 GMT
No. They are as strong as a wolf is in their human form. They can hurt vampires, yes, but not as much as another vampire could. But my Dhampirs are more prone to being able to have gifts to help alleviate that problem, like Bella.
She'll likely have the (SPOILER) shockwave power that she has in the Solstice Saga, though it will be a bit more tweaked and refined, if you will.
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Post by Enjorous on Jan 3, 2011 4:30:25 GMT
Shockwave? Like kinetomancy?
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Post by Twigon on Jan 3, 2011 4:35:26 GMT
I like that word. Kinetomancy. Well, the dhampir seems a little too weak to me, but the power part balances it out pretty well.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 3, 2011 4:45:33 GMT
I've never heard that word before. What's it mean?
Yeah, they're not super strong like vampires. They're halfway between a human and a vampire, stuck between the two worlds for all eternity. Unless they die, then they become a full vampire, but I have to work the kinks out of that idea first.
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