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Post by Hollowgo on Dec 31, 2010 9:09:03 GMT
So what first? A/B/Am/R or A/B/K/S?
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Post by Twigon on Dec 31, 2010 21:48:10 GMT
I got two hours of sleep. And I have a math test today.
Can anyone say stupid?
The one with Kate and Sophie sounds interesting, but the dynamics of the one with Rosalie and Amara peak my interest.
I don't know, just do whichever one you like better.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 0:19:16 GMT
Probably the A/B/R/Am one first.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 4:13:17 GMT
Good choice.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 5:14:53 GMT
I am throwing out what I have for this story so far:
So Bella's gonna be a half-human, half-vampire with a belly ring and gold eyes, Alice is gonna be long haired and from the Volturi and Amara and Rosalie will already be together prior to when they all end up meeting.
Esme's coven: Bella (eventually Bella/Alice), Chloe (OC), Jasper (eventually Jasper/Jane).
Carlisle's coven: Edward, Emmett, Rosalie/Amara.
In the end, Edward and Chloe are imprinted on by Blake and Autumn (also OC's) and Emmett becomes mated to Heidi. Carlisle and Esme end up together again and everyone is a big, happy family. The Volturi aren't pure evil and the wolves aren't as jerkish.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 6:21:21 GMT
Nice. I think it might be a bit easier to replace one of those wolf OC's with Leah, rather than develop a whole new character. And you could elimnate Chloe and the other OC as well.
Just a thought.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 7:13:20 GMT
I rather like building up new characters, though. Look at Amara's success. I want that for all of my OC's and I'm pretty sure I could do that. Don't you? Besides, I think it adds an interesting element to the story as a whole.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 7:16:36 GMT
Yes, you could do great with more OC's, but developing three OC's at once takes away from your concentration on the actual story.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 7:20:05 GMT
Perhaps, but it wouldn't be all at once. Chloe would be the first to get the focus since she would be the first to appear. I may change Blake to someone else, though. My friend suggested Paul, so who knows.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 7:21:56 GMT
A question, are you going to switch around with POV's?
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 7:24:31 GMT
That is as of yet undecided. I may at some point in time to either Rose or Ama's. For now it'll be in Bella's POV. Why do you ask?
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 7:27:03 GMT
Because sometimes forming relationships are better viewed through one point of view only. You, of course, could probably pull off several points of view.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 7:33:12 GMT
Perhaps. I don't know yet. We'll see.
If anything, I'd stick with Bella's.
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Post by Twigon on Jan 1, 2011 7:50:03 GMT
Good idea, but it always is Bella's POV during every story. Switch stuff up a little, maybe.
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Post by Hollowgo on Jan 1, 2011 8:12:10 GMT
Well in Crimson Sun it'll be in Amara's and Alice's for a good while, then Bella's (it'll switch).
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