New story, it looks like it may be good

[lysystrata]

This is a new story with a bit of a weird angle. The concept seems to be Alice, armed with her visions but she has the stalker aspect of Edwards personality. Somehow the author makes it seem sweet with her which is odd and perhaps a bit disturbing, still it is story worth watching.
It's only two chapters old but is well written and interesting, despite an obvious need for a beta reader.
here's a link www.fanfiction.net/s/6676461/1/Premonitions_Prevail . It's called Premonitions Prevail.

~Sara~

[Twigon]

I'm reading that! Surprizingly, I want to see Bella beat the shit out of Alice (lol; first time I wrote this I put down Edward, so stalkerish is her personality) some way or another. First Bellice I've read in which I've wanted that. Good story all the same, but now it's three chapters.

[megster1992]

As long as it's done well and not thrown together to just be a story, it will be good.

I think I'll keep this on alert.

[Twigon]

Yeah, it's good, but as demonstrated in the latest chapter, Bella is probably waaaaaaaaaaay too bi-polar.